http://best-served-hot.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] best-served-hot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rude_not_ginger 2009-11-30 06:22 am (UTC)

ooc

I can't tell you how much I love this. This, this is wonderfully brilliant and sad and amazing.

This makes me wish I had many more adjectives and enough that would describe it.

The repetition of it is simple and haunting. The description of the forest, their meeting place, somewhere serene and I think it fits for all the rush each of them have had to deal with. So fast paced and they never thought of just stopping and being because they thought they'd always be there. I love the waiting. I love how she tries to tell him but they focus on their last moments. I love the talk about his change, the wildness and how he says he's going to live. I love it all. To bits. Itty bitty bits.

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